1. Maria, I don’t know why you would think you were “punching above your weight” with this. You scored a knockout! Such a beautiful twist at the end, it just leaves me wanting more, to follow A on her journey beyond this point, but of course this was the perfect spot to finish. I love the way they all misunderstand each other’s desires… or do they? Perhaps M understands A perfectly, far better than A herself does. 😉

    • Thanks so much for saying so! I’ve never tried anything like this before so I think I was feeling a bit insecure about it when I first posted it. But I’ve had some lovely, encouraging comments about it so I’m excited to keep at it. And yes, I do think A understands herself the least of everyone. 🙂

  2. I totally agree with Lace – I don’t know why you’d think you were punching above your weight with the style as you’ve done a beautiful, beautiful job with it. This is definitely the most atmospheric of all the entries I’ve read. More like this, please!

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